The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the cute nickname and the message that it is possible to have a super amazing relationship with Jesus
09/19/10
I like how this stresses time spent with the Lord. Good message of how the inner person grows and changes.
09/22/10
Our time with God is so important! Just one suggestion - it would be easier to read with a space between all the paragraphs. Nice writing.