The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed how you described both you outside self and the person who dwells on that lovely body you described. I could tell you have a huge heart and a great compassion for others
09/19/10
Really great approach to the topic. This is pretty deep truth expressed in a unique way. I love your roof color; it sounds a lot like mine! lol Good writing.
09/20/10
I like your creative take on the topic. It made it seem that you are actually inviting the reader into your story as a friend. (Which I guess you are. :) )

I also like how you ended it by saying that prayer "involves all three aspects of the inner person." I hadn't really thought of it that way ... it's a mighty powerful thought!

You also gave me a new word to look up in my dictionary: "occluded." Thanks for that. ;)
09/21/10
I like your take on the topic. Thanks for letting us see in you.
09/23/10
Loved your title! Very enjoyable to read! The word essence for Spirit brings to mind the pleasing scent of a favorite cologne or perfume...By the way, you have 2 inches to your advantage; I'm 5 even!