The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed how you described both you outside self and the person who dwells on that lovely body you described. I could tell you have a huge heart and a great compassion for others
Really great approach to the topic. This is pretty deep truth expressed in a unique way. I love your roof color; it sounds a lot like mine! lol Good writing.
I like your creative take on the topic. It made it seem that you are actually inviting the reader into your story as a friend. (Which I guess you are. :) )

I also like how you ended it by saying that prayer "involves all three aspects of the inner person." I hadn't really thought of it that way ... it's a mighty powerful thought!

You also gave me a new word to look up in my dictionary: "occluded." Thanks for that. ;)
I like your take on the topic. Thanks for letting us see in you.
Loved your title! Very enjoyable to read! The word essence for Spirit brings to mind the pleasing scent of a favorite cologne or perfume...By the way, you have 2 inches to your advantage; I'm 5 even!