The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
Love this! You have so beautifully depicted the inner person in all of your characters. I wanted to know more about each one. Very nice.
You have done a great job showing how many people can appear one way to the world but deep inside something entirely different is going on.
09/18/10
You did a nice job with this topic. I'd love too see this piece in a longer format, with the characters fleshed out more - it would make for riveting reading.

Great work!
09/19/10
Your title prepared the way for all these illustrations of what really goes on inside people that are in our sphere every day. Hope we'll be more alert to that.
09/20/10
What a great idea to show the differences of many people's souls! I was somewhat surprised when the story jumped from the bus driver to a completely different character, but I guess I should have seen that from the title. :) I found myself captivated by Don's story and wanting more! I love how he had all the students sing for him in his dying moments.

Love how you put all these short stories together so nicely. Great for the topic!
09/21/10
You did a great job showing us the inner person in each of these characters.