The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely poem.
09/19/10
Great take on the truth of Romans 7. It is a battle in every Christian's inner person, and so much does depend on the choice.
This poetic metaphor could not be more fitting for this week's theme. Even as much as we know who we are, it is still a struggle not to be pulled across the line. Your poem expressed this beautifully.
09/21/10
This was a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
09/21/10
Lovely word choices and wonderful message.
09/21/10
A delight of a poem, stirring and convicting, challenging and refreshing--all at once. Yet another wonderful example of your incredible talent!
09/22/10
A lovely poem with a strong message. That ever-present inner struggle echoes the topic in a real way.
Congratulations for placing 8th in your level and 29th overall!