The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
Touching story. A vivid reminder of what C.S. Lewis wrote: We don't have a soul, we are a soul; we have a body.
The inner man (soul)lives forever.
This is a beautiful story. Death doesn't have to be this horrible terrifying ordeal if you know Jesus is waiting for you on the other side. You demonstrated this with your realistic Mrs Len.
09/18/10
You wrote this tender story very well. I have a "Mrs. Len" in my life and someday, I hope to be one, mayself. The deaths of God's children is a glorious thing and you portrayed that wonderfully!
09/21/10
It's hard when a dear prayer partner goes home, but its wonderful to know that their inner man has been constantly renewed. Nicely done.
Congratulations for placing 6th in your level and 22 overall!
09/24/10
Very vividly written of the moments preceding a renewed life in eternity, one we can be assured of and know is a certainty with Christ as our Lord. Nicely written and well expressed!