The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
What a difference it makes when we look at someone through the eyes of love. The MC drew me in and your creative writing put pictures in my mind that made this interesting from start to end. Great work.
What a lovely love story. If the MC ever gathers his courage the choir director will have quite the ideal man.
This is definately a unique story.

I like how you used a humbled person's ability to see the inside of someone else who comes off as brash.
09/22/10
I like the way that you crafted this story, showing what he sees and then contrasting that with what others see. I hope he someday gets the nerve to talk to her, and that she will see beyond is quiet shell.
09/23/10
Congratulations on your level placement and EC!
This story makes one stop and ponder why we are attracted to others. Is it by their fruit, or by their physical appearance? Had the MC not loved music would he have missed the beauty he believed existed inside the choir mistress? I love stories that make me think and yours is no exception. Congratulations on your well deserved EC placement with this story.