The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
This is such a sweet hope-filled story. Maybe a bit light regarding the topic, but I liked it very much.
09/16/10
Your title brought me here, and I'm glad. You drew me into the story with your characters and your descriptions. Great writing. (Then ending words "ballroom of her heart" made me wonder if the ballroom was physical or heaven?)
This is a lovely story.
Loved the descriptions of the ballroom!

Would like to hear what Melinda's story was.

Would also like to know what actually is her dream come true.
09/21/10
Simply, simply beautiful. Loved it.
Every little girl dreams of the ballroom dance. I loved this. Great descriptions. Thanks.
09/22/10
How hard is must be for a child in a wheelchair. I'm glad she finally got her dance with a prince.