The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
The title of your poem reminds me of what my mother used to say in response to
her gastric proclivities.

Seriously, when I read the entire poem, I couldn't help think of all the young people who have yet to focus on the
inner man.
This is a beautiful poem about how life changes us. Well done.
09/18/10
Great poem! I think a little punctuation would have made the flow smoother, but all in all, a wonderful message in poetry.
09/21/10
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could teach our children to nurture the inner man while they were still young. So many follow the path of your poem. You gave me something to think about.