The Official Writing Challenge
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This was great. I can't tell you how many times I laughed out loud. Thanks for a fun read.
I loved your colorful descriptions!

I had no idea where this was going but had to keep reading. I am not familiar with that movie you referred to, but still enjoyed the read.
09/22/10
Loved the MIB feel of this piece. A very fun read.