The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a charming skit. I particularly enjoyed how Noel kept finishing his mom's questions. I was a bit ciriousabout his age and wondered why Ann giggled at Kyle. Was she flirting with him? Over all a nice job.
09/18/10
Good message of seeing what is really going on in hearts and homes. A couple of good questions to think about too.
09/21/10
I enjoyed this. Those are two thought-provoking questions that Ann was asking. I loved that Nolan kept interrupting his mother to "tell" on her. It made for wonderful dialogue.