The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
Great message. Unfortunately,
the "class" mentality creeps into our churches far too often. I would suggest a few improvements in style. Long ago I learned the deadly impact of the "to be" (passive) verb when writing. Action verbs turn a story into more than an essay. The less "was," the better.
This is a wonderful message. I really enjoyed how God used one pastor to speak to the other. There were a few times when the quotation marks through me off as who was speaking, if it was a direct quote from the Bible, but that might have been my tired brain. My brain didn't miss your message though and it was a nice take on the topic.
09/18/10
Good message that we all need to have reaffirmed. Wish we could see more as God sees!
09/21/10
Wonderful message. It is so easy to treat people better if they are dressed nicely. I pray that I can be a person who sees the real person, not just the exterior shell.