The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
This was a quite interesting piece. You surprised me at the end. Nice job.
09/20/10
Creative approach. I liked your description of their energy exchange toward the end. Thanks for sharing!
09/21/10
Isn't it funny how everyone wants to be better than everyone else? Your ending was a surprise. Nice job.