The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/10
Yep, I've got her in me too. Nice job capturing the frustration. :)
The more I thought about this story the more I laughed. This was an absolute delight. To think I thought you were going down the typical multiple personality road. Delightful! This was a wonderful read.
The more I thought about this story the more I laughed. This was an absolute delight. To think I thought you were going down the typical multiple personality road. Delightful! This was a wonderful read.
The more I thought about this story the more I laughed. This was an absolute delight. To think I thought you were going down the typical multiple personality road. Delightful! This was a wonderful read.
09/18/10
Your "locked box" was a bit "out of the box," and very captivating. Great writing!
09/18/10
Well written, and a good surprise at the end. A little problem mid-way through with change in tense, going from past tense to present. I was momentarily confused. But overall, a great tale, and I'm rather glad I didn't see the tongue-in-cheek until the end!
Great story! It was so serious and intense. I was thinking a serious mental illness.

I actually laughted outloud at the end!

09/20/10
Loved the ending. That was not what I was expecting!
The prisoner locked inside - what a unique way to present this week's challenge; especially when there can be so many identities to deal with as a fictional writer. A fun and interesting read.
Hehe... I thought your story was leading up to the inner child... but you surprised me! She wants to be a fiction writer. Great ending.

I just love it! Thanks.