The Official Writing Challenge
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Ahhh, very good example of when thinking is very important. This starts out with mostly telling of facts, but then gets into the story with more showing. Good job.

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A unique take on the topic. Good job!
09/12/10
Nicely done. I liked the way your title tied in with the conclusion
This was fun to read. It took me back to my nursing A&P not as intense as this one, but close. You also did a great job with the subtle message that we should apply what we learn not just file it away for a game of Tribial Pursuit. :)
09/16/10
Good job. The background given got us quickly into the classroom with our own anatomically impossible hearts in our throats. The message was clear and given with interest. Congratulations!
09/16/10
Great job - congrats on your EC!