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09/09/10
What a tender account of the pain of Alzheimers Disease! We generally only hear of this struggle from the viewpoint of caregivers, not those afflicted themselves. Thank you for this - I loved it!
Awwww, very poignant story. So difficult for the person and family, but sweet story. I saw a few very minor grammatical things, but very well-told story.
Such a horrible disease. You did a good job with the POV.
So sad.
09/12/10
Great characterisation
This is such a bittersweet story. I loved how you made sure hope was infused in it. Alzheimer's has to be one of the hardest disease to live with and live through.
09/15/10
Both grandparents on my dad's side have Alzheimer's, so this story was so incredibly poignant for me. Well done.
09/16/10
A beautiful nugget of something that is experienced every day by so many. Yet, the hopeful dependence on the Savior is uplifting. Thank you. Congratulations.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall as well as receiving an EC!