The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/10
I enjoyed this and found the end rather convicting, as my husband has been after me for some time to agree to getting back on track with devotions as a couple. It's too easy to push that aside in the busyness of my days. So, thank you for that!

I'd like to know the rest of the story - what decisions Garrett makes about his restaurant and so forth.

Good writing!
Good story. I'd love to see it expanded with more showing and less telling. I wonder if this is set in Portland, OR, near my home, or Portland, MI...
09/12/10
I liked the way you piled stress upon stress and the end message was well articulated. Personally I reckon he should sell the restaurant and start something new elsewhere!
Every couple should take heed of the last paragraph. What a wonderful way ringer closer to each other as well as bring God into the relationship.
09/22/10
Kate, this is a winner in my book. Convicting and what I needed to hear in these times when evil and disease abound.