The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/10
Very creative! Since having a small stroke 3 yrs ago, I have become very familiar with the different parts of the brain and their functions. God truly created an amazing organ when he designed our brains! I noticed a typo in your first paragraph ("where" instead of "were") but it only momentarily distracted me. I enjoyed this - good job!
Nice job certainly a freash POV
Nice job certainly a freash POV
09/15/10
Love it! As someone who works with mental processing in kids all day, this was both amusing and accurate. Well done!
Creative story! I "got it" about a third of the way in, I think, and then was trying to figure out some of the names. A few minor grammar issues, but otherwise fun story!
09/16/10
Very clever! I enjoyed this! When I saw the initials A.C.T., I thought of the test but never imagined it would turn out to be theme of your story. :)