The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how you told the whole story just through the MC's thoughts. You gave us just enough information to have an idea what was going on, though perhaps a tiny bit more setting may have made it even more clear. Sad but wonderful story.
This is such a difficult topic and you did a wonderful job handling. This was well written and tugged at my heart.