The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/10
Loved the MC's memories and Jack's sunshine attitude--and the fun twist in the summary sentence. LOL
This was a fun read and a charming love story. It is true there are times in life when it's better not to think too much.
i could relate - I'm the one that thinks too much and misses out. I enjoyed your story, and really enjoyed how she got to throw his line back at him in the end.