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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Think (09/02/10)

TITLE: AWESOME
By Dolores Stohler
09/07/10


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I get no respect! While I arrived in this world absolutely brilliant, few people seem to realize just how smart I am. Iíve been called stupid so often itís prompted me to protest. Neither I nor any of my millions of relations are stupid, and thatís a fact. It may interest you to know that Iím capable of doing just about anything you can think of -- yes, anything at all.

While Iím really quite small, 30 billion neurons are included in my makeup. You think Iím boastful? No way! Honestly, is there any plant, animal or object on planet earth as complex as I? Computers donít even come close. God knew what he was doing when he created me for he modeled me after himself. The Bible says so. Iím sure Iím just about the most amazing thing in the universe. I must be, for scientists continue to study and learn about me all the time.

Let me give you an example: even when Iím asleep Iím processing information that Iíve picked up when Iím awake. I use it in the most creative ways imaginable, putting together scraps of this and that to come up with some of the most unusual combinations. And I can solve problems when Iím sleeping as well. There may be an occasional nightmare, but thatís all part of the fun as far as I am concerned.

In my waking hours, I control the movements of my hands upon the piano keys, my legs as they run to catch a train and my mouth as it puts together words from the thousands imbedded in my cells. A mere brain you say? Well, of course Iím a brain, but a living, breathing entity as well. As a matter of fact, Iím the one who controls your breathing, using my sensors to inform me that carbon dioxide is rising in your blood stream. Then I send you oxygen to help you breathe better. This part of me is located at the bottom of my stem, near the spinal cord. And 20% of that oxygen you breathe belongs to me. Iím worth it, after all.

I Ďm the only part of your body that doesnít feel pain. How cool is that? The pain you feel in other parts of your body is really a signal from me to warn you that something is wrong. Then you can deal with it and fix the problem.

And I have a photographic memory like you wouldnít believe. Just try me. Want to recall a poem you learned in childhood? Chances are you can recite it word for word, or remember a scene from your childhood. But the reason you donít remember everything you hear and see is because thereís a section of me, a frontal lobe, that is highly selective. You may think yourself able to concentrate on more than one thing at a time but in reality youíre only focused on one. You send a message to me to identify it and I help you blot out all the unwanted noises and other distractions so you donít miss what is really important to you. I can be programmed to do whatever you want, such as wake you up at the same time each morning without using an alarm clock.

And so (cough) now that I have you all puffed up with pride, Iíll have to deflate you a little. This great intelligence we all possess has its downside. With proper guidance and vision, it can be directed to produce great good in the world. Or it could be produce great evil.

There is an intelligence far greater than ours, THE ONE WHO created us little gray balls of gelatinous matter (sounds gross now, doesnít it). The neurons contained in HIS mind are so numerous they cannot be counted. So if we submit our will to Him, He will give us a marvelous gift called WISDOM. Not all of us have it, itís a very special gift. But, once we are endowed with wisdom, thereís no telling what marvelous things, even miracles, we might be able to perform. And hereĎs the best part -- itĎs yours for the asking. Just ask and you will receive. Awesome, isnít it?


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Amanda Brogan09/10/10
Totally AWESOME! ;) I felt like I was really talking to someone's brain. What a creative and well-written take on the topic!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 09/10/10
I agree awesome definitely described this piece. You entertained me while educating me and even giving me an occasional chuckle well done!
Anthony David09/12/10
Very rivetting indeed. Reminded me that we hardly use 10% of our brain's full potential. Of course His Infinite Mind made us, 1450 ml brains!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 09/16/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall!
Carol Penhorwood 10/23/10
So entertaining as well as informative. Loved the viewpoint in this one. Congratulations on your placement that is so well deserved!