The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/10
Wow! What an awesome story for "think." God knows the thoughts of people when the doctor's and their monitors can't tell if there's any brain activity. Amazing job here!
09/10/10
"Doctors" that is. (I wrote "doctor's" above.) Oh well. :)
This is a touching story and I really enjoyed it. But I also know how important it is to donate organs it's a heatwrenching situation.
09/12/10
I loved this piece. It was written with poetic harmony, yet it was a story. It flowed beautifully, but with increasing intensity and I felt like I began in a patch of still water and then floated closer and closer, with increasing speed--to the rapids, coming dangerously close to the waterfall.

Awesome!
This is a story I could have wrote about my mother. I know from experience, those that appear brain dead, can hear and do shed tears. I saw it happen.

Great story.