The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/10
Weddings always make me cry and this was no exception, especially seen through the eyes and heart of your MC. Yeah, this one tugged at my heart for personal reasons.
09/04/10
Oh, that is a moment of raw emotion, giving away your daughter but gaining a son! You definitely captured it.
Aahh you almost had me in tears. They do grow up much too fast, but that's our job as parents- to raise happy adults. It sounds like you did your job.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.