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This is well done. You really put the emotions in the story.
09/07/10
Very well done soliloquy. I think you captured this man's surprise, amazement and delight in having been touched by the Master, and coming away clean in body, mind and spirit. Touching and thought-provoking.
I enjoyed this. A reflection on how Jesus heals us both physically and emotionally. Good job.
I like this...his undercurrent of excitement and unbelief. The only thing I'd suggest is maybe add a little more of the suffering and physical ramifications of his disease besides just the emotional ones. I love Biblical fiction, and this one didn't dissapoint.