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09/06/10
I thought it was wonderfully human the way your MC couldn't manage it. Made me wonder how I would cope if I tried to give up chocolate!
Oh I so understand the MC's dilemma Mt Dew and Coke are my vices. I've tried hard too. It gave me a nice chuckle.
09/07/10
Oh yeah, I think we can all relate -- but I don't need to say what my addiction is, do I??
This was good writing, a fun read, real people. I really liked it.
I loved it! My addiction is Diet Coke. And I try to hide how much I drink, too. My husband is always nagging about that. Funny story and I'm sure the kids got a kick out if it.
I enjoyed the humor as I identifiied with giving up an obsession and having help I didn't really want in the process..
So.... do the kids get soda now? :o) Cute story. I really liked it. Good job.
Oh what a tangled web we weave
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