The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderful story. You need to check your quotation marks. If the same speaker is talking in the next paragraph you don't end the paragraph with quotes, but you do start the new paragraph with quotes to show it is the same speaker. Other than that, it was a fantastic story that really covered the emotion of embarrassment. I really understood what the teacher meant when she said the scars on the inside take longer to heal.
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