The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/10
The mom handled this situation so beautifully. For all moms with little girls, this story is probably sounding a bit close to home. Good job.
I liked this story! You wrote it very well and it had a great example for all moms in handling a sharing and hurt feeling problem.
09/06/10
Sweet
This is a charming story. It would be perfect for the take home Sunday School papers.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.