The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my! and here I thought this was going to be a romance! I love the humor all the way through, and the concluding line is priceless. I'd say the sodbuster with his variety of feelings got what he deserved.
If that sodbuster likes fried chicken, he better mosey on down to the next barn and work on Plan B. What a delightful read.
09/03/10
Once again you've created an entertaining, fun and witty tale in perfect rhyme and meter which left me smiling. A+++!
09/04/10
Having just come from a week at the fair, I particularly enjoyed this well composed fair fable!
How fun! I enjoyed this. :)
You manage to tell a great story while making the rhyme and meter seem so easy.
Congratulations for placing in the top 40 overall.
03/03/11
Only an old Iowa women would understand all that a State fair brings to the fair. So much fun to read... almost could hear Bill Riley in the background!