The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely poem. It reminds me of the song Here I Am
09/06/10
Great use of the topic throughout this faith-filled, beautiful poem.
One tiny correction: "planes" should be "plains" in the second to last verse.
09/07/10
Highly scriptural and very practical poem. Can work a little more on rhyming I think. Do keep writing!
09/07/10
A very sweet devotional poem, with a nice, easy flow. A good read :)
09/08/10
Very emotional and empowering piece.

Loved it!