The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this was I intense and quite suspenseful. I really enjoyed it and the underlying message.
09/06/10
You did a great job with this story and the metaphoric message came across clearly in the end.
09/07/10
Marvelous description of the whole "I saw Satan fall..." episode, including the eons leading up to the catastrophic event. Very well done and impressive!
09/08/10
Excellent. I echo the above comments.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.