The Official Writing Challenge
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This is delightful. What a wonderful imagination you have.
09/06/10
This was so delightful. From beginning to end. The style was consistent and made me smile throughout. I want to take Levi home with me and console him. Good job!
Poor Levi. Not a good day to be a lizard. Good job.
09/07/10
Laughing cranes and crying Leviathans ... all we need are bright colored pictures to accompany the story and we'll be set. ;) This was cute and has a title that begs, "Read me!"
09/08/10
This is a very interesting piece of writing. Nice wordplay in your title. One thing that I found difficult was the way that Levi seems to be several different characters. At one moment he's shy, the next he's shooting fire out a a helicopter. That was just a bit confusing.