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Well written portrayal of grief knocking on the door and entering in uninvited. Thank you for sharing with us the feelings of shock and denial that accompany death of a loved one.
Good description of stage dynamics.
Blessings and happy days. :)
Reader: Presentation of this story was a nice change and you made it so easy to be in Rachel's shoes. I felt as though I was playing her role.
Good approach to show the topic. Grief brings all the emotions/feeling you described. I like the way you led into the comfort of God.
This was a touching tribute to all heroes everywhere. You definitely went through all of the emotions of grief.