The Official Writing Challenge
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This made my heart ache for you, even though your dad is in heaven, the pain from the loss of a loved one is almost unbearable. You brought me into your story and as my own heart aches for my mom who died at age 57, I can empathize with you. But isn't it wonderful to know they are in a wonderful place?
08/28/10
This filled my eyes with tears. You did such a beautiful job of describing your father's death and your own anguish and conflicting emotions at the time. Very good writing!
What a great tribute to yor father and very well written! Very touching.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.