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08/26/10
Nice meditation on the creation of man
08/27/10
Beautifully captured - the miracle of the creation of man. A lovely poem. Two lines I really love -
'A form began to grow, A mirror of the King'
and
'He gathered up his form and breathed a birthing sigh' -
just wonderful. Thankyou
08/30/10
Perfect title for this beautifully written poem. I especially like the last two lines. Two thumbs up for this one.
This is a lovely piece and represents the topic and Genesis 1 in an artful, beautiful way.
08/31/10
Very simple and dear. I enjoyed the story of creation it tells so well.


Mona
Excellent poem on the breath of God in creation, a beautiful picture.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.