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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Breathe (08/19/10)

TITLE: First Breath to Last
By Allison Egley
08/25/10


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I AM the breath of life,
There is no other.
I AM the very air you breath,
The source of all life.
I AM the breeze through the trees;
Refreshment in the heat.

You are My child.
I have given you life.
You are My treasure.
I love you.
You are My sheep
I will protect you.

I AM the creator.
Without Me there is nothing.
I AM the great physician.
I put breath into dying lungs.
I AM the morning star.
Bright and shining.

You are lost,
But I will lead you.
You are condemned,
But I redeem you
You are hopeless,
But I am hope.

I AM the beginning.
Before even the air, I was.
I AM space,
The invisible air holding all things together.
I AM timeless.
Eternity is but a breath to Me.

You are my instrument,
Singing praise with every breath.
You are my beloved.
Every prayer you breath I answer.
You are My child.
I love you.

I AM Alpha,
The first breath.
I AM Omega.
When you breath your last earthly breath,
I AM.

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Psalm 150:6
Let everything that has breath praise the LORD. Praise the LORD!


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Elizabeth Cain08/26/10
Completely on topic. Excellent flow. Wonderful read. Thoroughly enjoyable. I liked that the structure throughout the poem. A creative way to keep my interest!
Charla Diehl 08/30/10
You certainly put the topic to good use throughout this Biblical poem. I enjoyed it.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 08/30/10
Nicely done. and Amen!