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Excellent! What a colourful character you've painted in Zach. And what a hero of a Mum!
I enjoyed this comedy routine from start to finish. Thanks for the smiles.
Hilarious:) Made me spit out my drink. You should have a liquid warning on this:) LOVE YOUR TITLE. You can take this on the road!
Funny, creative, well-written. Great job! I loved this.
I could clearly see it all before me, a semi-filled comedy club... You really drew me in.

An editing note instead of peaked I think you wanted piqued.

You do have a great set of jokes there. I could see you being a comedy writer in the near future. :)
I just saw your hint, maybe you and your son could be comedy writers.:)
Delightful. It must be comforting to know your son has a fall-back job potential in case Plan A doesn't develop. Or, as part of Plan A, a merry heart doeth good like a medicine. There is nothing like a happy congregation.
It is difficult to write a comedy routine that plays well for the reader as well as a live audience. But, you've done it.
Laughing is so good for our souls. This is just great.