The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! That was a really great poem. Loved it! :)
This is beautiful. You did an outstanding job describing the typical Christian life.
08/30/10
I liked the progression of each verse and the impact of the repetitive last line in each verse. You leave your reader with much food for thought.
08/30/10
I like the way subsequent verses develop the story of redemption. Powerfully done
Really excellent free verse poem, beautifully written
Beautiful...I loved every word. Especially liked: Moulded in His Hands
He defines my boundaries
This - His image in clay
and I AM breathed upon
A truth He refuses to surrender
He wears my dust
Grace - amazing, astonishing and astounding
. Such a poetic picture of creation and redemption. Good job.

09/01/10
Wow, what a touching and well done poem! Thanks!