The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
Wow. This is a beautiful and well-written love story . . . left me in breathless awe. A winner in my book.
08/30/10
You had me hooked from the beginning. Wonderful, touching story with beautiful descriptions. Loved the ending.
08/31/10
Haunting descriptions in the last paragraph. Written so the reader can experience the relationship of the two. I notice how often when one mate dies, the other quickly follows.

Mona
You drew me in and I related to the characters at so many levels. I could easily picture myself or a family member at many of the scenes. I also know that often elderly people will die within a short time of their beloved's passing.