The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This is a beautiful and well-written love story . . . left me in breathless awe. A winner in my book.
You had me hooked from the beginning. Wonderful, touching story with beautiful descriptions. Loved the ending.
Haunting descriptions in the last paragraph. Written so the reader can experience the relationship of the two. I notice how often when one mate dies, the other quickly follows.

You drew me in and I related to the characters at so many levels. I could easily picture myself or a family member at many of the scenes. I also know that often elderly people will die within a short time of their beloved's passing.