The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/10
This was nice! I liked the believable and easy dialogue lines. The subject matter was good, too. I've lost two friends in the past year and half to breast cancer, so I understand the fear and hatred of this awful disease. Good job!
I could feel the fear and tension of the MC. You did a great job pulling me into the story and I even was crossing my fingers for the MC.
09/02/10
Congratulations on your EC placing and also taking 2nd place in your level. Great job with your MC--I felt as though I was sitting in the waiting room taking this all in. So glad it ended with smiles.