The Official Writing Challenge
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This story speaks of so much sadness. The writing is good and you drew me into the story.
I dunno, but maybe I'm weird. I loved this. It was one of my favorites.

To me it was a clever message, and used the whale as metaphor for mankind. It seemed chuck full of facts. It educated, and entertained.

it least now I know the reason why the whale, (if a whale it was) puked up Jonah. But not saying it didn't happen in God's good timing mind you.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 40 overall.
Wow! This was amazing, Benjamin! Just as rhythmic and flowing as any of your poetry. And extremely creative!

Congrats on scoring in the top 15 and top 30!!!
Oops! Top 40 I mean. Anyway, congrats! :D
VERY powerful, Ben! I can see why this is a fave of yours. Now I gotta figure out which of MINE to link up!