The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I liked this! I assumed I was about to read an account of a sporting event. Instead, it was of something of much greater importance. I love it when I see the elderly making decisions like this because you know it's going against a lifetime of doing something different - very special. Nice writing!
This is beautiful. I could picture everything so clearly, even the knobby knees. Well done.
This was certainly thinking outside the box, or in a box? Not sure, but original, interesting inspiring, and entertaining
I really enjoyed this one. You built up a sense of suspense - at one stage I thought they were going sky-diving! Loved the surprising twist. Congratulations on your 3rd place, Michael!