The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
I love this - what a beautiful poem. A particularly great last verse.
08/27/10
I liked it. Just a tinge of honest sorrow yet it radiated wisdom, graditude, faith and joy. Thank you!
08/27/10
This is beautiful in content, imagery, rhyme and message. This is worth multiple reads--that's my opinion.
Oh my goodness--what a gorgeous poem, so beautiful in imagery and in meaning.
A great poem, and the touch of sadness really got to me. Good job!
08/30/10
Simply lovely. I agree with all the other comments. I too will read and reread this beauty.
You've taken wonderful snapshots of life and captured them with your words.