The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/10
This seemed so real to me up until the point where I realized the man was testifying. I don't know if I would have used the military time in the explanation since he was talking to people. Anyway, aside from that I really enjoyed it and all in all I could see this being an actual incident and great story as well.
This gave me chills. I was surprised when it became part of the sermon, but what a wonderful and needed sermon it was.