The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow--not that mom's gift of discernment was truly a lifesaver.
I could sense something big was coming after I read the first paragraph. You managed to get my senses tingling without giving away the ending. That takes a talented writer.
Men aren't always what they seem. Good job!
Wow - knowing now that this is probably based on truth is even more disturbing! A great story and really well written - may all us Mums hae this much spiritual discernment when dealing with our children.
Awesome story and even better message about discernment! Well done and an early Congrats! :)
Oooh, goose pimply shudders. Great pacing, and though the ending felt a little rushed, I realize (of all people) that you did a great job of revealing the ah ha moment in a PG way. I do believe the Lord gives mothers a sixth sense about their children. Great example of the topic, great writing!
Whoa! Mom knew best, for sure. I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Well done.
Congratulations, Mari, on your EC!
Congratulations, Mari!!!!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall and for your EC.