The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a good example of how our simple minds can't think like God does. But if we have faith and give God our burdens, He can do wonderful things. There was so much more I wanted to learn about your characters, to see if I could see myself in them. But you did the important part of showing God's love.
Enjoyed the "realness" of this in showing genuine emotions of despair during a tragedy. Excellent example of Christ's afflictions on the cross which ultimately saves mankind from an eternity of pain and suffering to those who surrender to Him.
08/19/10
You address well, one of lifes biggest questions. Good Work. God Bless You, Ruth