The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
Poignant, intriguing, an attention grabber. Great finish line. Nicely done.
08/19/10
Stirring and sad, yet this ends on a hopeful note. I found this to be tastefully written when describing the intimacies of marriage. Great job.
08/20/10
Evocative. Enigmatic in its honesty. Modigliani in its expression.
08/21/10
Although there is underlying sadness and despair, the hope in the story overcame the sadness. I felt in tune with your MC. In today's world, it can be so difficult to stay together and be faithful to one another. Outstanding job on what must have been a difficult story to write.
08/22/10
This story is so full of lovely, sad imagery it makes my heart ache. Beautiful work, as always.
08/23/10
Beautifully written message that regardless of the transgression, we all need to know that someone we love...cares. I agree that this is tastefully done in all of its vivid tenderness.
08/23/10
What a beautifully sad way to paint discernment. Your nuances are perfect. You have a gift.
08/25/10
Oh Chely... Such sadness but with a taste of hope. This piece is magnificent.
08/25/10
Simply outstanding. Whew. I think I held my breath the whole time!
08/25/10
Beautiful, tender, sad, totally evocative. Yes, those intimate moments were perfectly written; the less said, the more powerful in this case. I felt it also left a little room for the reader to project his/her own mood or experience onto the ending; was there, perhaps, just a tiny touch of doubt remaining? Just my thought....
08/26/10
Wow. Oh, wow. You made me feel the emotions of the MC. I was living every thought and moment with her--I felt almost intrusive.
08/30/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.
08/30/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.