The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
Stunning depth, flow and meaning! Truly a masterful piece. Especially awed at:Few people know they yearn for more
Or hear the moans they sighed.
There were quite a few more, but using "discernment", I had to pick only one! :)
08/19/10
I could really relate to this touching poem. it was something I've needed to hear for a while now.
08/19/10
Some great lines, fixed facades, excellent. You do poetry well.This would go well with the theme of a retreat I went to, called Unmasked.
Blessings, Ruth
08/24/10
I loved the idea behind this poem. Good job!
08/25/10
God certainly blesses your shining gift! Wonderful phrasing, builds at just the right speed and tempo, and sings out the victory at the end. So very well done!
08/25/10
Your poem is a story, sadly real, but with wonderful hope at the end. The final stanza is outstanding.
08/25/10
Wonderful message wrapped up in a well written poem. Nicely done!
08/25/10
I enjoyed reading your poem. So true... the masks we tend to hide behind. It is wonderful to know that God knows the real me and he loves me anyway!
08/26/10
I knew this was good! :) Congrats on your EC!
08/26/10
YAY...1st place and an EC...Congratulations Carol. Way to go!!!!
08/26/10
Congratulations!I loved this--the word pictures and the message were terrific.
08/26/10
Congrats! A couple of the lines here hit a too close. Great job!
08/26/10
Congratulations, dear Carol! Thank you for sharing your God-given talents with us. You are truly an inspiration! This is a masterpiece! Blessings and more.
08/26/10
Carol, what an amazing message here, and so eloquently told. Just beautiful. Super congrats on your Editor's Choice!
08/26/10
Congratulations, Carol! I love the insight in your poem and found some delicious rhyming selections. I'm so thrilled you've received this recognition. Blessings on your head.
08/26/10
Congratulations on your place in the top 10, Carol. Very deep sentiments and enjoyable to read. God Bless.
Nancy
08/26/10
Carol,what a beautiful beautiful poem. You and God - you got it together! Sincere congratulations
08/26/10
Congratulations on your 1st place and EC win...lovely poem!