The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
I liked this imaginative piece and chuckled at the ending. Good job.
Interesting ending, though maybe he should have kept the "detector" set up for his next gullible criminal. ;)
This was wonderful. At times I had to read some lines over, but the ending was brilliant, I didn't see that coming at all.
Very creative. I didn't see the end coming, but it made me chuckle. Well done.
You described Nykes, great. He gave me the creeps! Not only a clever story, this had a good pace.
08/24/10
Brilliant and ingenious! A great story - humorous, thought-provoking and with quite a message.
Very creative! I enjoyed reading this. Good job.
I loved this! Great character development; great story-telling; great idea for the topic!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.