The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
"Exquisite" was the word that jumped into my mind when I finished this very impressive poem. I expect to see this in the EC list.
This is so rich with imagery - exactly that - ethereal thought - so difficult, if not impossible to cage. But you were still able to capture it and hold it here in words. And the reader walks about them in observance as one might do at the Louvre, totally amazed.
I found myself thoroughly engrossed in this poem, that doesn't happen often for me in this genre, but you have such an eloquent way with words, I was drawn in from the beginning.
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.