The Official Writing Challenge
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I've always liked this story in the Bible--you retold it beautifully with your poem.
Such a gift to combine a story like this into poetic phrases that literally touch the heart - and express words that teach not only truths, but healing as well.
Excellent message we all need to hear and be reminded of over and over.
This is lovely. All too often church members can form little cliques or judge others unfairly. I wanted to stand up and cheer when the elder sat on the floor.
Sweet encouragement to embrace spontaneous opportunities to share MERCY. Well done!
Sweet, sweet, and sweet! Sweet surrender, sweet love, sweet acceptance. This is the best word I could come up with that touched my heart deeply with this skillful poem.
Margaret, That was truly lovely.The story is old, but made more beautiful by your verse! Well done,Blessings, Ruth