The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/10
I've always liked this story in the Bible--you retold it beautifully with your poem.
08/20/10
Such a gift to combine a story like this into poetic phrases that literally touch the heart - and express words that teach not only truths, but healing as well.
08/21/10
Excellent message we all need to hear and be reminded of over and over.
08/22/10
This is lovely. All too often church members can form little cliques or judge others unfairly. I wanted to stand up and cheer when the elder sat on the floor.
08/23/10
Sweet encouragement to embrace spontaneous opportunities to share MERCY. Well done!
08/23/10
Sweet, sweet, and sweet! Sweet surrender, sweet love, sweet acceptance. This is the best word I could come up with that touched my heart deeply with this skillful poem.
08/23/10
Margaret, That was truly lovely.The story is old, but made more beautiful by your verse! Well done,Blessings, Ruth