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08/19/10
Cute and clever and I learned something about crabs too. Liked all the puns in this piece. Great job.
08/21/10
Cute parable, informative without getting bogged down in details. Enjoyed the crabs' names, clever!
08/22/10
This is great. I had to laugh at the names Crab Cake and Crab Dip. This was an enjoyable read, sprinkled with humor and a great message at the end.
08/22/10
Simply adorable and so "see" worthy! :)
08/23/10
Message given and receive. I loved all the crab names, but my favorite reference was to the crab bisque. Creative.
08/23/10
A delightful read with a great message.
08/24/10
Absolutely adorable! Very creative. Wel done.
08/25/10
Really loved the word play! This would be a fun reader's theater skit for church.
08/25/10
Very interesting read! I like the way you put across the message with such sense of humor. A very well crafted tale and good take on the topic from the eyes of crabs.
08/26/10
Creative use of names. It should be Christmas day for us all every day!
08/30/10
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and in the top 30 overall.